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Jan 1, 2008 | 2:28 AM EST

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My first flash in 2008 :) WOOOOT!!!

I hope to make this a series depending on my score so.... vote high!

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jak235312jak235312

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

i agree

i agree with CruzAzul-19 you got potientional but here is what you can do in the next movie
1 longer music so no looping the song 3 times
2 i gave you a 4 so dont be sad
3 a little better on the windows paint animation
4 notify me when #2 comes out i want 2 see it


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CruzAzul-19CruzAzul-19

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Liked it.

This was actually a pretty great flash, and the story of it was really really great. The music in this was a great touch, and this deserves a better score. Just work on making voices next time, and just better graphics. I see potential in you, and I think you should make this series. Practice makes perfect, and you could get a lot better if you do the series. STill great flash, and Happy New Year! :]


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goldie12345 responds:

Well i tried to add voice but.... they could not be heard clearly


ALFnottvshowALFnottvshow

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

try harder

you need some more practise



mrjangamrjanga

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

mspaint or flashmx?

It looked like you made it on paint.



chubbychildchubbychild

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

1/10

It was 100% tweens :(

But you st least tried which is more than 1/3 of newgrounds does.


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