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a little fbf peice i put together. Enjoi :D
could be better...
it was very short... You could of added millions of more things...
um... not trying to be mean, but you could of done ALOT better
one thing to improve on, would have looked massively better if you optimized it
A little random FBF can never go wrong! Nice piece of animation, the music flows together nicely as well . . . though it would be even better if it was longer. Keep up the good work!
That was good but dont do random stuff like too randomly. put a little plot and try to animate something. It was good.
well it there is not that mutch of this movie to really comment on but I will try to do my best:
it was pretty cool but the little dots animated in flash 8 gets kinda old after a while, I mean I see atleast 1 of thees every day on the portal. so it is not very creative.
my advice is that you try other things or that you try doing something extremely original. my best flash movie Ideas ever came from late at night when I cant sleep/on a camping trip! thats what you need to use your spare time when your not on newgrounds for, you would be surprised how good that works!
the movie was ok, and I gave it a 5 for no real reason, I figure its going to pass anyway so why not let this guy get a high score?
I hope you find this rather long review extremely help full
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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