Score: 9
"You know it's not that bad for a early game."
date: November 14, 2008
Animation/Graphics - I didn't think this was bad drawing wise. I know it's not the hardest thing to draw a smiley face. :) See I just did one there. Anyway, yeah nothing really wrong with the drawing at all. A couple of things that were kind of rough, but things that can easily be cleaned up. Looks like you weren't the most worried about how things looked because you were just testing out a new game and everything.
Story/Content - Just get to the other side without dying. Of course like you said this was just a test of your game skills and actionscript skills. The jumping was a little off, but that wouldn't be that bad with perhaps a bigger screen where you could jump over several different things and/or had moving enemies that came after you and stuff. Or perhaps just a ceiling to keep you down. =P I played through to win the first time and then I played through to lose the second time. Of course the play again button was a must and both endings were pretty good. The introduction was good the way you reminded people that it was just a test.
Audio - A nice song in my opinion. Not only did it go well with the game play itself, but it also went well with the ending credits and everything. Good choice here.
Overall - You probably have the potential to make a pretty high scoring simple game like this.
November 14, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks.
