Score: 4
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date: December 30, 2007
Your frame by frame animation is definately not the best I have ever seen.
you need practice.
I usually enjoy these fbf animations, and I cannot say that this waS a complete waste of time.
800 frames was a little too short, especially if you are animating higher than 15fps, and you should be animating somewhere around 20.
15 fps definately isn't the way to go. If it was a higher framerate, it would have been nicer, but the only time you wanna use 15fps is when you are animating, redrawing every frame in high detail.
I have seen alot of noobie flashes, and noobie fbfs. This falls into the catagory of 'n00b' but i can see that you actually spent some time on it(I added a star for that). most n00bies think that flash goes fast, and that you just spend 2minutes on something like brackenwood. I see that you have animated before, and that is also another reason why I am subtracting some score.
with past expirience in animating you should be able to make a decent flash, but this was kind of crappy. I did see alot of n00bie flashes worse than this by not so n00bie people such as you. At least you passed judgement eh?
You added aidio and that is good, because a flash without audio is usually boring.
the intense music in here made me actually get interested, so I added 1 star. However, you could have added some sound effects for 'the blob' and made it even more interesting. I probobly would have also given you another star.
Now the graphics were atleast decent, and you did use different color (I added +1stars). And this was pretty decent with effects and good for a 15fps animation (+1stars). But your little blog thing was mishapen, and you could have spent more time on it.(-1stars)
When you animate next time, you should spend more time on it, and make it thinner.
now the effort you put into this was not the greatest, and I know you aren't the greatest animator. You could have added more effort, but i have seen sooo many crappy flashes, (and I blammed them) that I feel that you added a decent emount of effort into this. so I gave you a star, and that leaves you with 4/10.
practice, improve,
i'll comment you later,
-peace