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This is a little trippy flash.
I tried to make my own style and I hope you like it.
Thanks for all cheerful reviews. : )
Artwork is nice.
To be honest with you, this submission dosen't have a lot of good to it. The artwork is nice, and the graphics are awesome, and that's really the only reason I even bothered to watch it the whole way through, but the fact that it was looped and had no plot or point to it really hurt this submission. The entertainment value was good mainley because of the artwork, but it wasn't that great ether, simply because of the lack of story. Next time don't make it loop, and add some sort of purpose to it. Overall, well it has potential, but you know that. Set your mind to making something good.
Not half bad....
Not the best flash but a good attempt, it has some deifnite little things that show this author is inexperienced, no play button, the animation looping in the end without a clear end...some more work and patience would've polished this more.
good enough for a first attempt (assuming this is your first).
yep, this is my first. I could do better than this, it's just one night of boredom.
nice, it is definately unique, keep up the good work
that was preety damn cool!
I enjoyed this. it was pretty wierd, but that does not mean that it was bad.
Il iked how you did the backgrounds and charecters, but if you had redrawn them a little smoother and tweened them in a trippy way that fit in. kind of smooth, and mellow.
I voted high, it definately boosted your score up a little. I hope you make more, and improve.
you have alot of improving to do.
but i did not pay attention to all the little things i could be nagging about, because I honestly enjoyed this.
It allmost went on my favorites, but then I realized that it wasn't that good.
but I imagine you put efforrt into this, and I respect that.
Especially for a first submission.
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