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I tell ya..
He should have taken the shoes. Couple things you should consider:
- The shoes in the beginning didn't make sense.
- The intro was too long with the text going all over the place (viewer loses interest before you show your first character)
- Story should be resolved by him getting something, even if they're a downgrade from what he's wearing.
The Shoe Master
I like the music.
Made me wanna get new shoes.
dude, would you mind if
I took your characters
and made another flash movie?
I'll give you credit, of course.
Let me know... fast.
My trial version of Flash MX is expiring in like, 2 weeks.
Good effort, I guess.
It helps if you have some kind of ... motive or goal for your piece before you try and submit it.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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