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Thanks for the second frontpage Tom!
The second installment of the series "Conditions".
PLEASE WATCH EPISODE 1 BEFORE WATCHING THIS.
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A criminal took Red (Member of the Police Department using "The device") his wife as a hostage.
In exchange for his wife, he wants Red's device.
But Red can't release the device because of the conditions (His adrenaline level is too high).
Stay tuned for further episodes!
things that MUST change!
Get better voice actors OR change what/how they say things in the script...
It sounds like a lame B-Grade movie the way they are acting...
Ironic, some said the voice acting was the best part in the movie.
Anywho, the cheesy part is over. Next episode will be concentrated on action and Red's plans.
These are quite good, nice storyline. The art could be better but still good.
The only major flaw was these episodes are way to short. Eps 1&2 should all be in just one episode.
Other than that I liked it.
I agree that these 2 episodes should be fused.
But the problem is, I worked on them seperately, meaning that I have to rename all library symbols to fuse them.
Also, the ending of episode 1 is so abrupt, that it needed to end.
yea the idea of the device is great, kinda reminds me of full metal alchemist, being able to create things using the material of something else, if you aint seen it before, i suggest you do it might inspire you with your series, good work, cant wait for the next one!
Since I'm an anime freak, of course I've seen FMA.
But I only watched 5 episodes.
Planning to watch them all though.
But I wasn't inspired by FMA. And I guess I don't need it, since I don't want to create a second FMA series.
Thanks for the advice and your review!
I don't really like the story so far
Even the base of the story has a big weakness: you introduce "The Device" as something that can form any object you need anywhere by forcing the atoms of the environment to move in the needed direction and make the needed bonds. In such stories we use to ignore the impossibility of such things, however even such a device cannot form anything anywhere, becouse you need the appropirate atoms to be in your courrent environment. For example if you have such a device with you in the desert, you will still not be able to make yourself a bucket of water, becouse the lack of iron atoms (for the bucket) and the lack of hidrogen atoms. You can't do much things with silicon, oxigen, nitrogen, argon and carbon. Maximum some nitrous oxid to knock out yourself.
Then this hostage situation: it's impossible to imagine that such an inept agent would get The Device! Becouse that's what he is: an imbecile, corny, fool twat! Why? Becouse even the lowest ranked policmen are trained what to do in such a hostage situation, especially that this one was the simplest situation possible. And this person whose wife the hostage was, was some high ranked one for sure, and still didn't know what to do, had no balls, and couldn't even hide his feeling in the critical moments. That's why.
However, the animatinon is good, the vices are ok, and the base idea had some potential even if it has been screwed. So, that deservs a 5/10. And if you could correct your mistakes in the next episodes somehow, or at least the good guys will not be inept, ball-less bitches, maybe the serie will have more success.
Ps.: For one reason I'm looking forward for the next episode: I'm curious about what punishment will this agent get for being such a pussy.
First of all: This is pure fiction. That, I assume you know.
I didn't say you could make a bucket of water of sand.
Maybe you could make a bucket of SAND, that is.
Second of all, judging a movie based on the personality of one character is simply ignorant.
This is no Mister Newgrounds competition.
Fair enough, you made some points though.
And as for the next episodes, Red will be much darker, as you can see in the beginning when he's talking about his wife.
nice but........ in the credits it said Wolfgang as Ella...? she didnt even say anything? wats up with that
Maybe you can't hear it, but she "choked" a bit.
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