thanks for the comment, and thanks for the constructive ctritic, that obviously worked more than the other comments.
And yeah, i'll apologyze with R-Monkey, because i said too many words that doesn't have any meaning with his comment, but is not very nice if you don't critic and you said "it's a stupid idea" that's offensive, and i think this place is full of genius of flash animation, R-Monkey is one of them and you too, but i'm not, and i only want constructive critics and not destructive, i submit here for that reason, you are good animators, and i expect some good critics, like the one you did.
If all the people here start saying "screw you""this sucks" then all the meaning of this site goes down.
Sorry for the long reply, and thanks for your comment.

oh darn! you are more and more brainless.
because! it's an animation style! it's an ANIMATION!!
and YES i animated it in flash, want to know the meaning of animation? "A simulation of movement created by displaying a series of pictures, or frames" I must draw it in flash??? that's what you think?.
Why don't you do something more smoother than this? ok go do some stick figure animation like the rest! and darn, is that an animation??

oooh! that's what you think? i hope you can ANIMATE something better! with what is called really ANIMATION, where te f*ck go the real animation? or you would prefer some stick figure animation with lack of movement? it's an animation style for christ sake!! that's why the graphics looks like that, damn! and the plot is simple because what is real important in this animation is the ANIMATION!!! why the hell you all newgrounds f*cktards have to make destructive and NOT constructive comments? ..wait..i know why, YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO GIVE GOOD CRITICS SO WHAT YOU DO IS DESTROY ARTIST WORKS.

wow! thanks =) but because it's short you have to kill me with that score? XP