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This is definitely not as good as any of the others.
well, it's not as bad as people are saying
at least you tried
and i thing the icon on it is extremely awsome!
not bad for 13 (im 14, and probably couldn't do tht.)
thanks yeah if you want to download the font i used for the icon, it's called " formfound.com " that isn't a website it's just the name of the font
wait your thirteen!!!!!!!!!!!!111
first of poor quality not very good. second i am reporting this your an underage user!!!
13 isn't underaged :S
Work To Do!
Okay, this submission was average, POSSIBLY a bit over average. Your animations went well with the flash, and you got the guts to post yourself.
But, you need lots and lots of sound. If you are level 5, say it, and add a "KACHING" sword kind of sound (or whatever the hell they sound like.) And if someone says "Fuck you", they should be pissed, so try 'yelling' (but not too loudly!) to the other hand.
But good job on the hand and animation! I loved it!
One extra tip... but music in the background. Quieter than everything else, but very noticable. And please, for the love of god, don't make it The Spanish Flea. </3.
Your friends of Newgrounds,
HRM [Hi-Resolution Mayhem]
Thanks for the input. I was adding this kinda like a pilot to see if people like it, and then I'd make it better and you really helped me out.
Nice try I guess
Hey man you gave it a shot but you have to work on this. Think more about your content because honestly this wasn't very deep! Talk about your accomplishments and goals, even if they arent flash-related...
Anyway good luck with your future submissions!
Thanks, at least there's some people that help me out...
needs some work but since you admit it sucked i give you an 8/10 and 4/5.
How will Kratos survive the Night?
A story about a kid and idk...
A short muisc video based on the classic song "The Window Cleaner" sung by George Formby
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