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Dec 23, 2007 | 9:13 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is definitely not as good as any of the others.

Reviews


Jessinator34Jessinator34

Rated 3 / 5 stars

hmmm.......

well, it's not as bad as people are saying
at least you tried
and i thing the icon on it is extremely awsome!
not bad for 13 (im 14, and probably couldn't do tht.)
good attempt


NorthAmericaProduct responds:

thanks yeah if you want to download the font i used for the icon, it's called " formfound.com " that isn't a website it's just the name of the font


whitecrow311whitecrow311

Rated 0 / 5 stars

wait your thirteen!!!!!!!!!!!!111

first of poor quality not very good. second i am reporting this your an underage user!!!


NorthAmericaProduct responds:

13 isn't underaged :S


HRMHRM

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Work To Do!

Hey there!

Okay, this submission was average, POSSIBLY a bit over average. Your animations went well with the flash, and you got the guts to post yourself.

But, you need lots and lots of sound. If you are level 5, say it, and add a "KACHING" sword kind of sound (or whatever the hell they sound like.) And if someone says "Fuck you", they should be pissed, so try 'yelling' (but not too loudly!) to the other hand.

But good job on the hand and animation! I loved it!

One extra tip... but music in the background. Quieter than everything else, but very noticable. And please, for the love of god, don't make it The Spanish Flea. </3.

Your friends of Newgrounds,

HRM [Hi-Resolution Mayhem]
Contributors:
-Dan
-Trevor


NorthAmericaProduct responds:

Thanks for the input. I was adding this kinda like a pilot to see if people like it, and then I'd make it better and you really helped me out.


CooldsunshineCooldsunshine

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Nice try I guess

Hey man you gave it a shot but you have to work on this. Think more about your content because honestly this wasn't very deep! Talk about your accomplishments and goals, even if they arent flash-related...

Anyway good luck with your future submissions!


NorthAmericaProduct responds:

Thanks, at least there's some people that help me out...


weeenersweeeners

Rated 4 / 5 stars

cool

needs some work but since you admit it sucked i give you an 8/10 and 4/5.


NorthAmericaProduct responds:

lol thanks