Score: 0
"A special L7C Flash review!"
date: December 22, 2007
I give this submission 0 stars because it lacked a plot I could harness and catch hold of. The subject was relevant but I found the message to be misleading and wrong. The windows narrator voice gets on my nerves, I would suggest using real voices next time and including less penises.
Also, if you improved the humor by adding in jokes that would be good. I can already hear the windows narrator telling jokes, and I would approve of that. The hardest part is probably adding in a sufficient pause for effect, but I bet you could do that.
I'm sad that this flash wasn't more thought out, I would have much preferred it if you changed L7C to KK. And changed the characters of Mario and Yoshi for Kats. I just wouldn't mind seeing that :)
I hope this review was helpful, and if you need help with anything flash-related in the future don't hesitate to ask someone in L7C :) We're friendly people and want newgrounds flash to become better and better. Good luck making better flash :)
December 23, 2007
Author's Response:
sorry but the L7C are even shitter than the KK imo.
and thats something