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Dot's Adventure

Author

Ray Patrick (machacker2000)

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Date Submitted

12/19/2007 | 04:34PM EST

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Current Score

1.69 / 5.00

Score Rank: #126,955
Popularity Rank: #116,819

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Author Comments

I made this in Excel Tech with Flash 3, so be kind! This took a long time to complete, since the period only lasts 15 minutes.. And they won't allow you to put sound in.. SO, I present to you... Dot's Adventure!

P.S. Thanks Brenton, Jamie, Emily, Philip, Ally, Maggie, Mary Taylor Ray, and Taylor for your support! XD
I would also like to thank the good people of NG for not blamming this. Enjoy!!

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Average Score: 4.8 / 10

Score: 5
adsds141

"Not to bad, needs sound to truly accent the beauty"

date: December 19, 2007

Put sound and you got a save

December 19, 2007

Author's Response:

All right! I may release a v 2.0 with sound!

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Score: 5
Ken-Sunshine

"Save up some money...."

date: December 19, 2007

I give it a three, it was pretty good. if you get your own flash animator, you can spend more time on your flashes.

December 19, 2007

Author's Response:

Yeah... I really want a DS tho.. :( So I paid money for that. Good news is that my parents can get an older copy of Flash off E-bay for my birthday, i think. It costs, maybe 40 dollars, and I don't need anything higher than Flash 4 given my XP level. I just now figured out how to put sound in, but the one I submitted with sound was Interactive Killing Game, which got blammed.

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Score: 2
amtrack

"slow it down"

date: December 19, 2007

if you slowed down it would turn out better, but everything moves so fast... but i understand some of it with the 15 min class period.. but maybe you should save and come back if that is possible.. single session animations dont usually do very well.

December 19, 2007

Author's Response:

Hey.. uh, dude?? I said it took a long time. I worked on this for about.. eh, 3 days. Most of it was to get the button actionscript done, since Flash 3 barely supports that and I had to hide it from everyone else, who still try to make 5 frame animations on 1 layer.

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Score: 6
theBLUR

"okay"

date: December 19, 2007

I like that it actually has a plot. It would be better with sound, but I understand why you don't have any. You should make a sequel with sound. This is a good start, so keep up the work.

December 19, 2007

Author's Response:

Thanks! Thanks a lot. This is my first Flash to pass, so WEEE! Lol. Speaking of which, did you like the "Wee" button?

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Score: 9
thornglitter

"lol"

date: December 19, 2007

I is confoosed...very impressive, with no sound.

December 19, 2007

Author's Response:

Lol, I always thought the little dot was kinda cute.. Thanks!

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