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This is my first flash submission. A stick figure attempts to cross a small gap.
Comments / Suggestions / Constructive Criticism appreciated.
Also great for a first flash. The artwork and animation were both really great. The sound work was good and the voice work was great as well. All of the skits were funny except the cannon, I believe you could've been a little more creative with the cannon. Other than that this made me laugh and is a great first flash submission.
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*Could've Used Background Music
I wasn't really sure how to add background music when I made this.
that was very good
just the noises sort of...
on the first few he yelled like he was on helium
and the car sounded better(the nnnnoooo)
apart from that very good
dont worry about every1 else that says its bad
they havnt made a flash yet
Thanks! I made this before I had a microphone so I had to use voices from Worms.
its to repedative
i liked it dont get me wrong but he always falls down the hole you basically know what is going to happen everytime there is no variation at all its just down the hole one way or another
The point of the movie is HOW he falls down the pit. It's supposed to keep you guessing.
nice and funny, just seeing him fall was pretty cool
I like the way he yelled waaaaa in the first leap ! That was funny ! You could work a tiny bit more on how realistic the movements look, some of them just seemed a bit unnatural....
I like these kind of movies, keep them up !
Yeah, this was my first submission so it was still a little iffy. I'm glad you liked it. Keep a look-out for a new one.
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This time Tuk has to start the fire...
WTF is life drawing?
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