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Dec 16, 2007 | 11:59 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is my first flash submission. A stick figure attempts to cross a small gap.
Comments / Suggestions / Constructive Criticism appreciated.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Also great for a first flash. The artwork and animation were both really great. The sound work was good and the voice work was great as well. All of the skits were funny except the cannon, I believe you could've been a little more creative with the cannon. Other than that this made me laugh and is a great first flash submission.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Good Sound
*Great Voice
*Great Story

|| Bad Points ||
*Could've Used Background Music

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PuffballsUnited responds:

I wasn't really sure how to add background music when I made this.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

that was very good

just the noises sort of...
on the first few he yelled like he was on helium
and the car sounded better(the nnnnoooo)
apart from that very good
dont worry about every1 else that says its bad
they havnt made a flash yet

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PuffballsUnited responds:

Thanks! I made this before I had a microphone so I had to use voices from Worms.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

its to repedative

i liked it dont get me wrong but he always falls down the hole you basically know what is going to happen everytime there is no variation at all its just down the hole one way or another

PuffballsUnited responds:

The point of the movie is HOW he falls down the pit. It's supposed to keep you guessing.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


nice and funny, just seeing him fall was pretty cool

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Awesome !

I like the way he yelled waaaaa in the first leap ! That was funny ! You could work a tiny bit more on how realistic the movements look, some of them just seemed a bit unnatural....

I like these kind of movies, keep them up !

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PuffballsUnited responds:

Yeah, this was my first submission so it was still a little iffy. I'm glad you liked it. Keep a look-out for a new one.