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This is my first flash submission. A stick figure attempts to cross a small gap.
Comments / Suggestions / Constructive Criticism appreciated.
10 stars for this
I like his cute voice when he falls and keep up the good work and i will never blam u
Yes, stick figure flashes can still be cool.
As this particular flash proves. I was amused at all of them, even the obvious ones, the little screams really added to this flash. As a short, this flash delivers, but could use a bit more for improvement.
As was mentioned before, background music would have added to the comedy, and a bit of detail, even with stick figures would enhance the experience. Taken all together, it added a couple chuckles, but each individual skit was to short, but giving anticipation for the joke but instead delivering it almost instantly.
I know it seems like a lot of points, but each just needs some fine tweaking rather then an overhaul. A good flash, more so for a first one, and I gotta admit, I loved the catapult :D.
Thanks! I did make this a while ago, so some of those points have improved. I was still a n00b when I made this so I didn't know how to add background music, and I didn't have enough experience to put more detail into it.
halerous i have to sare this with my friend
Creative and funny.
The animations are short, but are worth watching.
I expected what the Bridge and Teleporter would do, but the rest, wow.
The Catapult and Cannon both made me laugh the most.
Yeah, there were a few predictable ones. I'd say the Ramp is the least predictable one.
Sorry for taking so long to respond... :P
This is a really good start for you! its really fun and funny. ill add this to my favs. its really awesome!
Sweet! If you enjoyed this you should check out a similar movie by me entitled 'Breaking the Bank'. It's sort of like a sequel.
What to expect when you're expecting (an acceptance letter)
Some magic frog BEATS!
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