Crossing the Pit
- Score:
- rated 4.43 / 5 stars
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- 90,848 Views
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- Genre:
- Comedy - Original
- fail
- pit
- gap
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Author Comments
This is my first flash submission. A stick figure attempts to cross a small gap.
Comments / Suggestions / Constructive Criticism appreciated.
Reviews
Rated 4 / 5 stars December 17, 2007
It's coo', it's Woo, it's now, IT'S WOW! for a 1st
Nice!, for a first. but yeah as permablunted said, more blood,
And again, exelent for a first, kep it up!
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2007
beautiful
I loved it...I felt bad a first but around the fourth or fifth try I started laughing. More blood though... simplicity is its own art form but this could use some color.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2007
Cool
I liked it. For you first flash that was actually pretty cool. The stick figure thing is played out but I really didn't count that against you. Keep up the good work...it can only get better from here.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2007
Cool
Nice for a first. Good animation. Some cool ideas. And I liked the stick figures scream when he fell down the pit. Nice work.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2007
Nicely Done!
Haha, this is awesome. The catapult one made me laugh every time. The only thing I could say to make it better would be make it bigger scale, and a few more options. But this is just simple fun. :)