Score: 2
"Sorry man but i dont think its to good"
date: August 11, 2007
well i havent ever created a flash video but i do know how hard it is so i wont be a dick about it,,,
These videos are two short and have too large of a file size for a video so short. the MP3 is really unnecaserry (my spelling sucks) and the voice overs arent to good, their is little emotion, and black mage isnt the type to be british, nothing against british people... but it isnt right, and fighter sounds INTELLIGENT! (which tells me your secretly attempting to summon the apocalypse) and their are no fillers, no scenes of your own origninality, and the SFX arent anything to right home about... and while it isnt necasserry, bloopers would make your video funnier. so work on voice acting, getting them correct, fixing the SFX, add a few original scenes, and cut the MP3 and add [maybe] a few bloopers... Im not saying ripoff TLFs version, but watch his and it should give you some pointers, i hope i didnt sound like an asshole here because i wasnt trying to. keep it up, practice, and redo, and im sure these will be much better ^_^
----MasterMarth