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Dec 16, 2007 | 12:43 PM EST

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***EDIT EDIT:
Okay I changed some stuff. The NG "tattoo" on Afromang's stomach moves with him, and CS goes all the way off the screen.
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**EDIT:
Lol oops clicked the wrong file!!!
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Afroman and I have been doing flash stuff for a LONG TIME now so, we saw "Allen Awesome"'s "My New Grounds" and loved it. So we made our own :D I hop you like it!

Reviews


RobertClockRobertClock

Rated 3 / 5 stars

RANDOM!

6/10, dudes you look like ur 10 year olds (no offence)


Smiley-Bob responds:

Yeh well, I'm about 10, plus 4 years, and a LOT more intellegence.
Afroman is younger, he's 12 or 13 I dunno.


mattrules44mattrules44

Rated 5 / 5 stars

.........

LEMON?


Smiley-Bob responds:

LEMON!


rhyme10rhyme10

Rated 4 / 5 stars

ah yes...

Lemon.


Smiley-Bob responds:

lol.


StickemUpOnlineStickemUpOnline

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Lemons!

Second one with lemons! Why do lemons make me laugh?!?! HA HA HA! It's a bitter laughter!!!11!!1! Anyway, cool idea both of you doing it together, no gay joke intended, I think it could have had a bit more animation in it though. I still got a couple of laughs out of it!


Smiley-Bob responds:

Thanks :D!


BezmanBezman

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Just not as good.

Liked the 'lemon' part.

It obviously wasn't as strong as the original. The 'tattoo' joke was weak and we frankly don't care bout what your favourite FPS games are. At least Allen's fave NG subs had some relevance to NG and therefore some resonance with the audience.

I think the lesson here is to bring in some individuality but keep it fast (don't linger on one element like you did the dick jokes) and keep it relevant (mentioning the homework was fair enough - but more about NG pls).

The actual animation/video editing was reasonably done though.

Ultimately, it's cool to see an alternative take on an idea but there's no argument about which is better.


Smiley-Bob responds:

Yeah we realized that after we watched it. We were like "Our thing doesn't have much to do with NG you know...lol".
It wasn't very good. I'm glad SOME people liked it.