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My first animation. It's about that portal game, and duracell batteries. Enjoy!
Everything in this by me.
Most of your score is coming from the fact it's portal. Otherwise, it's just one big ad- no go.
it was ok. Good idea but poorly executed. Try using a real voice. It is a lot more ... "easy" to listen to. Also, if you have a black battery maybe you shouldn't put it on a black background! :O
You get 3 stars for the joke
The joke was funny. The delivery was not. You needed to shorten the dialog. Most definitely get someone better than the auto-voice to imitate Glados and you might want to up the animation quality too if that's at all possible. Basically, you've got a good setup in theory but more work needs to be put into the delivery. And for the record, it's a pretty decent first animation but I do not give people more credit just because it's your first animation. Still, overall, decent job.
Voices werent understandable
i just didnt like it
A short film about a park bench
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