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A flash I had to make in about 2 days because I am a procrastinator, hence the shortness. This is also my 3rd complete flash. Boo-yeah!
Voices by Kyle A. Carrozza (tvskyle).
Your art style is great, and you do a good job on the backgrounds as well. The only problem I had with it was the sound. Make sure that the background music doesn't drown out the voice overs, or else it will be muffled. I could barely hear what the narrator was saying. Other than that, it was great!
I wasn't expecting much (as you yourself said it was only made in 2 days) but this came out really well, with some of the goofiest animation and sight gags in a furry flash!
And I can't believe the tiny amount of people that have had the benefit of viewing this flash.
As said below, this easily can stand toe to toe with any of the top 50, if not trounce them full stop.
My favourite joke was "Don't... Just Don't", dangerous humour is all the best.
I just wish for you that this is seen by a lot more people, it's a guarantee they'll like it.
...I'm lost for words. This deserves a much higher score than it has.
Graphics - 9/10 - The characters and backgrounds were very well drawn and were quite colourful. The only flaw I can find is that some of the animation of subtle movements (hands moving, flag fluttering) was a bit choppy. Otherwise, flawless.
Content - 10/10 - This has honestly made my day; I'm still smiling as I write this. The concept was fairly original and the flash was well laid out with the alternating Do's and Don'ts. Best of all was the humour, which was edgy as well as downright hilarious.
Sound - 10/10 - This is some of the best usage of sound that I've ever seen in a flash. The variety of music was excellent (I particularly enjoyed the music from Ocarina of Time in the credits). The voice acting was flawless also.
Overall - 10/10 - This in my opinion is better than many of the flashes on the Top 50, and it is a pity that more people may not see this as it is among the best things that I have seen on NewGrounds. Fantastic work!
that was really good. i liked how you made the dos and donts. i liked the do something heroic part, with its counterpart. same for open the door. it was fun. make more man
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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