Score: 4

"That's it?"

by: HarryControl

date: March 23, 2009

This has some potential, but needs work. There wasn't really any ending at all, almost as if you cut the story off and could be longer.
I like the idea though.

Score: 7

"Not bad for a first flash."

by: Molotov

date: March 21, 2009

I liked the text font but the text kept going too fast and i didn't get a chance to read some of it so you need to work on that but overall it was good for your first flash and i loved the song you added at the ending credits,keep on improving and good luck. :)

Score: 5

"Showed potential"

by: Aci6

date: March 12, 2009

This showed a lot of potential, the idea was there- giving the story of 'A Christmas Carol' through the use of Mario sprites with some vivid colour on a stage but it didn't go anywhere.
It had some nice visual charm as well as dialogue charm but it ended without reason and could have been longer and fleshed out to a decent story.
Overall this went nowhere, but it had a flicker of life to start with.

-Aci6-

Score: 5

"It had potential"

by: PeanutButters

date: February 8, 2009

But keep at it!

Score: 1

"ummmm"

by: Giokai

date: November 1, 2008

It was pretty good for a first try to be honest......