Score: 5
"Jesus, what is with these Shades Gang homos?"
date: December 12, 2007
They're all a pack of ignorant little homos and if I ever see one of them out on the street I'm going to curb stomp his ass until...oh wait I'm admin nevermind I love you all.
Well ice, it's way too short for my liking (make that my -loving-), but I suppose that was your point. Art be art, author prerogative and all that.
It could've used a background - anything really. Alley would have been sweet.
Also could've used more dialogue and, like, some more humor. Leek's almost incoherent babbling was enough for a little smile, but that's about it.
But thanks for busting flash caps in mofos for talkin' shit about me. Or something.
Check yo self b4 u wreck yo self;
-NovaShades
December 21, 2007
Author's Response:
thanks... i think
