Score: 7

"good..."

by: BioRogue

date: December 12, 2007

i do get what you are saying and all, but its the 'last year 4 mil people died' that got me. people are always dying and you cant stop that, (considering the pop of earth is i think over 38 billion) 3 people are born every second and 1 dies every second.

that isnt to say i dont get where you are coming from or that i dont like this, just be carefull how you word things

Score: 10

"Great!"

by: Noxx11

date: December 12, 2007

Conserve the earth! :D

Score: 10

"well.....good but......actually its awesome"

by: newgroundman07

date: December 11, 2007

i juz realized its all in the message

Score: 8

"NaHo2"

by: mafiainexile

date: December 11, 2007

I understood the message but the animation was a bit crappy. 2/5 8/10

Score: 2

"Ugh, take two."

by: Glorystar

date: December 11, 2007

Not really worth having on Newgrounds - the concept is great, but the implementation needs help. Rewrite and come back. Graphics are crap, timing is crap, and grammer is crap.

Either pick a 2-D or a 3-D grave, don't mix them. Make the Earth round, and make the clouds look more like clouds and less like a fault line. Make the "play" button more readable. Get rid of the star-like white glob in the first part, or put more stars in the animation. Get rid of the white space immediately after "play" is selected. Either ask "Do you want this to happen to you?" or "You want this to happen to you?" - don't tell people they want to die. Make sure the word "a" in "Earth is a beautiful thing" comes in at the right time. Remove the extra space in "What if it vanished", and add a question mark. Make the green recycling circle at the end the right proportions, and make all the arrows point the same way. Don't make the grave dirt zoom in. And finally, make sure that the death count doesn't sit half-on, half-off before it comes on.

The basic concept is good, though, and I liked the sequencing, for the most part. Just revamp it, and it could be much better.