Score: 6

"not bad but not good"

by: achiwa

date: May 22, 2008

i think you should make them NOT repeat and it was short and i mean shadow just turned around and sandbag went flying. keep trying though

Score: 3

"Meh..."

by: Chrono-T

date: December 10, 2007

this is bad, I'm sorry... But it is... I have better fluidic motion in my youtube movies (under teh name FadingNight) tahn you do... but, I use stop motion animation with my sprites (making each frame a picture that are then put together in a movie) Just look at them, you will see.

You need to work on getting more frames per second. YOu may have 24 FPS, but you dont seem to be using them... it seems mroe like 1 frame per second... YOu need to have him moving each time a sprite is put and only move once per sprite. Moving several spaces in one sprite is going to make it seem like walking (which will look horrible with running sprites)

Score: 7

"Keep on trying"

by: CruzAzul-19

date: December 10, 2007

This would really be something great if only is had small details. Like sounds, a little better drawn sprites, and when the character is talking put what they are saying on the bottom of the flash. Still this is good,you worked hard on it, and keep it up! :]

Score: 2

"Heres Some Constructive Criticism..."

by: Mike-Hedgedog

date: December 10, 2007

Not to be mean or anything but that really sucked...

1.The spritez were poorly animated and the BG was really blurry.
2. Some spritez were traced better than othaz.(E.G. Shadow running)
3.It was too slow paced. (Slow frame rate,slow movement)
4.What did Shadow do while fighting Sandbag? He ran into him, turned around(in a very poorly and unanimated way) and then just growled.

Synopsis: You have alot to improve on. If you need help PM me or watch some other sprite filmz. My first will be out by Christmas since itz a Christmas special.
You have a good idea just not the animation skillz. Keep trying.

~Mike-Hedgedog~

Score: 9

"its good"

by: homework77

date: December 10, 2007

its nice