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Stupid Sentence Generator

December 10, 2007 –
January 1, 2008
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

Make real working words and phrases at the click of a button!

So yeah, I've seen a few of these on NG from time to time, so I figured I should make one before it becomes another annoying trend! ^-^

PS: I have a compressed edition of this game for all you poor users with dial-up.

Reviews

---GRAPHICS---
Not much, moving on...

---AUDIO---
Again, not much...

---GAMPLAY---
What really saved this from me 0ing it.

---POSSIBLE IMPROVEMENTS---
It's just a stupid sentence generator. There's not much to improve ON. I'll let you know by PM though.

---OVERALL---
Retarded, but well worth the loading time. 8/10

^^Good Points^^
The only really interesting and different thing that I found in this was how you had two different formats of statements. Other than that, pretty ordinary.

^^Needs Improving^^
Haha, compressed?? I can't imagine what this filesize could have been before you compressed it to just under 4MB. Seriously, this should be no more than a couple hundred kilobytes. Regardless, the sentences generated are a little lack luster. They weren't very funny for the most part.

What an intresting idea for a flash game! I've seen similar on other sites using javacsript/php, but never anything within the flashy. The interface is simple to use and there really is a lot of variation to the sentences as well, but a little more would always be an improvement. The audio could be compressed some more to help lower the filesize, but otherwise all is great. Keep it up!

-cd-

The major downside to this is the fact that it is really basic, it requires someone to just press a button and read random sentances, although the credits looks pretty nice and the music is okay. Though I can't see how the music really fits in with the idea of the flash itself. You have an idea but needs expanding a little more.

Consider user interation, such as a user putting in words, those words randomly selected to form sentances, though that would create a story game, eitherway. Also, the music ends and doesn't loop, you might want to make it loop as well as adding a mute button to this. Keep working at it though.

1/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

This is quite a novel idea, I don't know how many combinations of sentences you can come up with but it is quite fun. The major problem I had with it, was it being too plain, simple, and buggy. It just turned out, to say it bluntly, ugly.

Now I'm sure with a bot of improvement, a few more modes, more words, a bit more colour, it could be great. But as it stands, it's below average.

It is quite a good idea, and I would like to see the idea developed but just a little poorly executed.

=Review Request Club=

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Score
2.86 / 5.00