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Flash Presentation Ocean

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Dec 9, 2007 | 9:35 PM EST

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I made this for science class, and my teacher loved it. I would like to know if you also like it. It may not contain action and that kind of stuff, but it's a school presentation. Rate the effects, music, presentation ,aniamtion, etc. Please. NOTE: A very special friend gave me the music, and images and information. I Wuv her! ^^

-Lupin

Notes:

I have to fix the mouse on first Scene, but you can find your way around to the fish.
I have to fix some minor stuff, I'll fix everything tommorow.
Half-Life 3 : Unforeseen Consequences trailer will be out soon, a collaborative project with some friends.

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Babyface-NicBabyface-Nic

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good, but needs work.

This was pretty cool idea. It does need some work though. For your index, It's not really a good idea to put words over an image like that because it makes it hard to see. Type and images are both thought of as images/graphics and u don't carelessly put two graphics together because you won't be able to see it properly. I you are going to put type on an image try messing with the type till it works. For yours, i think u should try putting a drop shadow behind the type. It will make it stand out. (this only works in some cases, u have to play with the type to get it right.)
Also when you go to the under sea part i couldn't find a way to return.
I'm not writing this to make u feel bad or nothin' cause its actually pretty good. Just giving u ideas to help u improve it. :)



sharkbate13sharkbate13

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

wow!!

wow nice graphics i like the song to :)) Good work man!!


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LupinX responds:

Thanks a lot! =)


lesherlesher

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Cool

Nice one dude, I could learn a thing or two from your flash for my own presentation in the future... And it's educational+caring about the environment!


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LupinX responds:

Thank you! =)


S0d4playerS0d4player

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice

Very nice for an education flash. The white text is hard to read with some of the backgrounds though. Try changing the text color. Also you should try using some shape hints with some of your shape tweens; they help you get the correct morphing look.


LupinX responds:

I knew hot to make the morph nice... But I had 30 mintues to go, so I didn't went into much detail. I think it looks funny.


ShifterPro9ShifterPro9

Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice

its pretty good:) plus i liked the music:D

also i can see why ur teacher liked it. heh i mostly do just cuz i like fishs:D


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LupinX responds:

Thanks, my friend chose the music. I'll tell her about it, she'll get happy =)