Score: 7
"Very nice story developments"
date: September 13, 2005
Wow I didn't see that coming at all, that was some very nice background you added in to the character there, I loved this, the idea with the hole was just great and the dialogue was improved, perhaps a bit cheesy at the end though but still good nonetheless, you found a song that fitted better with the movie too, which was nice to see.
LOL you ended this one in a similar way to which I said you should've ended the first, kinda weird weeing that.
Anyway, well done, great job, keep up the good work.
Peace Out, Afro Stud
4/5