Score: 4
"Work on your graphics. I liked a couple of bits th"
date: April 27, 2008
I liked the idea of mixing up a load of songs, but some of them needed more time to be developed, most would have benefited from more of your own interpretation and your graphics did bring the whole thing down.
Let's start from the beginning. The typography in the menu is reasonable - the fonts working well. But why is your name and the title that later appears Times New Roman? Seems inappropriate.
Song 1 - too literal. Your graphics add nothing that wasn't mentioned in the song.
Song 2 - at least you bring in the Chuck Norris joke.
3 - I liked the ending, with the lyrics.
4 - Here, the overly literal translation actually made me chuckle.
5 - A beautiful interpretation that I hadn't heard before. The cut-off was a bit abrupt. I liked
6 = Again, way too literal
7 - I liked the colouring of the guy's face and shaded chin. I liked your interpretation. Definitely ending on a strong point.
Apart from the lack of creative interpretation, your biggest issue was definitely the graphics. I don't know where to suggest you start improving - the proportions could have been more consistent, don't use the brightest colours - use something a bit less saturated for grass (for example) - take more time over your lines...
Just practise, give yourself more time to do your work, and you'll get there.
-review request club-
May 3, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks. I appreciate that you give me feedback on each of the seven songs ;)