Score: 9

"hilarious"

by: shadowchaotailsevil3

date: May 6, 2008

This was actually pretty good for a one person collab

You had me laughing all the way

Score: 6

"Decent work"

by: blackcat2000

date: May 2, 2008

The lipsynching was fine, in my opinion, but a few things got on my nerves. Firstly, the looping of a lot of things were off (like the building lights) and the motion tweening. Too much of it. Such as:
The ground the guy walks on for the WHOLE of "Go West" and "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" (yes, emphasis on the whole, since I thought you were going to do that for all the rest, which you fortunately didn't).
In addition, when things were stretched, it wasn't... awesome to look at. Like the pikachu, for example. He wasn't just drawn thin, he was quite obviously squashed. If necessary, just make him "normal" then obscure the pokeball a bit. It's worth covering it.
But overall, it was a pretty nice piece. Looking forward to future ones!

Score: 6

"Half & Half"

by: Aracid

date: May 1, 2008

This was a good concept, I liked the many different skits. The only thing that bothered me about this short was the sloppy art and the choppy animation, although I can tell you tried which is a good plus. It's not so bad, I just think you lack 'patience' when it comes to quality.

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Score: 7

"Alright"

by: Shanus

date: April 27, 2008

It was ok, good idea, kinda held back by your draw/animation skills.

The graphics were ok, quite simple, and the earlier songs were quite simple just tweens, so you definitely need to work on that.

The sound was good, really liked the whole selection. I Believe I Can Fly was definitely my favourite.

Overall the content was good, you need to work on the menu, would've liked to see something a little more shiny. And work on the drawing, but other than that
it was quite good.

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Score: 4

"Work on your graphics. I liked a couple of bits th"

by: Bezman

date: April 27, 2008

I liked the idea of mixing up a load of songs, but some of them needed more time to be developed, most would have benefited from more of your own interpretation and your graphics did bring the whole thing down.

Let's start from the beginning. The typography in the menu is reasonable - the fonts working well. But why is your name and the title that later appears Times New Roman? Seems inappropriate.

Song 1 - too literal. Your graphics add nothing that wasn't mentioned in the song.

Song 2 - at least you bring in the Chuck Norris joke.

3 - I liked the ending, with the lyrics.

4 - Here, the overly literal translation actually made me chuckle.

5 - A beautiful interpretation that I hadn't heard before. The cut-off was a bit abrupt. I liked

6 = Again, way too literal

7 - I liked the colouring of the guy's face and shaded chin. I liked your interpretation. Definitely ending on a strong point.

Apart from the lack of creative interpretation, your biggest issue was definitely the graphics. I don't know where to suggest you start improving - the proportions could have been more consistent, don't use the brightest colours - use something a bit less saturated for grass (for example) - take more time over your lines...

Just practise, give yourself more time to do your work, and you'll get there.

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