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Hello everyone, this is my 2nd flash submission =]
This started out as a school project for a competition, but after very little thought i decided to put it on Newgrounds for you all to see :D
This is the first adventure of Tommy Napalm!
Animation by Liam Wright
Voice Acting by Bradley Townsend
Humor was....alright, could've had more
and the animation was quite average.
The voice acting was lacking a bit, as well.
Hah, you were clearly too nice about this.
Thank you for being constructive about this submission at least :)
I have more stuff coming which wont be as nearly as horrible as this was.
If that was your second animation, was a good one. Try work in the humor skill, and the time give the other. Good luck.
Cheers =] i only spent a few hours making it though, so im proud of what i did for the time amount, im making a longer TN film and hopefully a series :D
Think how to make this looks funny or remembering-worth
I"ll let you pass then.
It was OK.. I didn't like or dislike it. Next time find a better voiceactor and practice on your animating and drawing skills.
However, keep it up! (I gave you a protection point)
It is funny and what mark did you get for it?
um i was away the day we were supposed to give it in so i dont know :P
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