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Dec 3, 2007 | 6:11 PM EST

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Author Comments

I haven't been doing flash lately, I whipped this one up with a lot of time and effort. I like this, personally. Please review it, I'd like to hear some opinions. The amazingly fitting music is _-={Precious Seconds}=-_ by MaestroRage. -45 seconds-




Rated 3 / 5 stars

The climax could have been a lot better...

But the right choice of a sentimental music and not-too-fancy art design really make up for a good presentation. I wish you should take more time on animating and polishing your artwork. Overall, for a beginner, this is already good enough!

- Glen


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


Personally, i hate it. It was totally random and useless. I apologize for being so harsh but i say what i think and see. I'm trying to think about ways you could improve it but i'm my eyes it's hopeless.

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Rated 1 / 5 stars

Oh god....

This is awful. The art is just rancid. The idea is beyond stupid and you obviously didn't put a lot of time and effort. Worst of all si the pre-pubescent voice making my ears bleed. Ugh. BAD!

KyleDaFox responds:

But obviously I stated that I put hours upon hours of time into it and loads of effort. Your ears are weird, no one else complained about my voice (which I think is fine, btw). Any actual CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would be nice. (What's wrong with the idea, why do you think I didn't put any time or effort into it, what was wrong with the art, etc)

Glad you liked it.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Spoiled =P

The beginnign was great, u know... the smooth music, the touchy touchy thing..

But the dude wif the gune juz blew it, man..
Try not to do a violence comedy & maybe u'll success...

The drawing are okay, could be better, tho..
Over all, enough to get my vote of 4

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Rated 5 / 5 stars


Wow that was touching in the beggining and funny at the end. I would probably fix the voice a little though, but other than that it was still a great flash. Keep it up!

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