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Well, here goes! My first flash ever...Please vote fairly, I worked hard on this.
I am trying out new techniques to improve in the future. Leave constructive criticism!
Alright for the first Flash
1.71 average score, bad for u BUT I think u should rlly AT LEAST get 2.3 or somethin.
So it short, so what, right? The quality of the stickman r pretty good, I know I cant do it or maybe cuz I hate stickman...
None-otherless, good job on ur first flash, and welcome to the animation world, LOL
Thanks for the compliment. As for the score, I'm just happy it passed. I'm going to make it longer next time, and maybe add some sound effects. Thanks again for the compliment!
it by far wasn't the greatest, but for it being your very first I guess it's alright
Not bad for a first.
Like the guy said before me, it needs a plot, try and make it longer and try and improve your animation skills.
nice one, i love stick figure fights, please make a longer fight. and have weapons in there, that would be soo awsome!all i can say is to get rid of the background, i'd rather have no background than a background with cubes.
Longer: can do
no cube bg: also can do
And thank you for the helpful review.
That actually sorta ryhmed.
Well, it wasn't a super mega chocolatey duper special flash, but its..okay.
Just didn't have that kind of feeling of a plot. But for a first flash its not bad not good, just average. Keep on going!
Yeah, it needs moar chocolate. And plot. But thank you for the review!
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