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Dec 2, 2007 | 12:32 PM EST

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Author Comments

Ok so its one of my first flashes so its not that great...
But i worked very hard in doing it and i took like 5 days to do it so please have be gentil. :)
Anyway the background is that your a kid that just got a girl friend and gets killed lol.
Anyway chapter:2 coming soon.

P.S.Its sort of a slide show...

P.S.S. I dint put a preloader so just be patient... :(

P.S.S.S.Please recommend this for Ultra violens(colection) and serious shorts(toons)

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speelingspeeling

Rated 0 / 5 stars

bad

maybe u could actually make lash, not a slideshow.\if it was animated, it would be better


Retrato responds:

You could make a lash?
Wtf is a lash?


JimmySaintJimmySaint

Rated 4 / 5 stars

hahaha

lol! for a slide show this is pretty good! bad graphics, but still good.


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Retrato responds:

Heh not only that it was my first flash.


TetsacryTetsacry

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Mah first flash

I really worked hard on this one but still its just a slide show but what can you expect from my first flash!

~Tetsacry_-Retrato's ALT-_


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Retrato responds:

Yes really it was my first flash people.
And yes this really is my ALT account.


ProjeXProjeX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Crazy

Hayabusa clan does know how to do sick stuff, graphics werent great, no movement, BUT its still too awesome for words. I may have overdone that.


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Retrato responds:

The Hayabusa clan has great animators(better than me actualy i don't know how to animate yet i just slide show)but i have a big imagination so things really do work out.Thanks for the good review! ^_^


WiiporterWiiporter

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Please.

DON'T PUT OUT SLIDESHOWS. THEY REQUIRE NO TALENT.


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Retrato responds:

Well all i can say is yes its true.
BUT the drawings sure were hard to do so thats some efort.
Besides i still dont know how to animate.