Score: 6
"Too Much"
date: December 2, 2007
You should have kept the rules short and sweet for better delivery. Men don't want to have to read a whole lot of complicated crap and errata to rules. (Comparing Law 32 to Law 35 is a good example of this).
Now, where I come from anything can be a man law as long as you rhyme it.
For exmple, law 33 could be summed up as "The woman's job is to feed, unless it's grilling you need." Or 84 is "If a girl is with thee, you run the TV." It saves time explaning things and penalizes the weak and stupid.
I digress. Less laws with more time put into presentation would have really helped this out.