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You like pie? Good.
And be gentle, its my first movie here or EVER ^_^
very funny and well animated, but it's too short
Hm, I'll give you half.
This movie is good for a first, but definitely needs more work. At first it is definitely too fast paced, and you should add a play and replay button at the beginning/end (if you don't know how, go to collections, and then flash tutorials, because there are some really good tutorials there that you could learn from). But I can tell that youre animations will eventually be pretty good.
Keep up the good work. Unlike 99.9% of the rest of the people posting crap here on NG you actually seem to have some talent. I look forward to seeing your next submission
hey man thanks! i had to submit this fro ma different computer where this is saved, so ill add buttons soon...at least the next time i get there
The end is hilary, but you need improve sound and graphics.
Not bad, for a first.
You could work on getting some sounds in, maybe "The Thing" saying something about the pie. Some of the graphics are sketchy, but all in all, a nice little animation there.
Work on the loop as well. Maybe an "Again?" button instead of auto-loop.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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