Score: 0
"Please"
date: December 11, 2007
I think it's better that you didn't do anything. From trying to unsuccessfully rip-off another artist, to making total and utter crap from what I've seen in your submission history, it's time to quit while you're still ahead or in your case: pretty far behind.
If you want my opinion, first start by getting a steady hand at drawing. Once you're decent enough for the viewers to even tell apart the background from the main characters, try cooking up a plot. You know....plot, like in the movies? A story that captivates the audience, key word being C.a.p.t.i.v.a.t.e.
Now if you want to make a parody of another flash series, that's just fiiiine . But remember: parody=funny. If it's not funny, you fail. However, I think you should solve the two previous issues before even considering dabbling into humor.
Hope that helps and I hope to see some improvements in the future.
December 11, 2007
Author's Response:
uhh i was just lazy ok i know how to do all that stuff!!