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This is a short about a trick-or-treater that gets a odd surprise. Enjoy!
An interesting concept that needs to be fleshed out. The juxtaposition of various holiday icons is intriguing but is in desperate need of substance. Like Andserson Cooper said, a little effort placed into establishing tension and character could make this a potential winner. I'll save my vote for what I hope will be a finished product. Keep grinding!
It is what it is
Not bad, not good either. I like the concept, but I agree with bigrich: more time was needed. With a little extra care and some dialogue (even just unspecific, emotive grunts) would make this a LOT better. I say work on it and repost. I'd like to see it.
Could be better.
The concept was interesting, but I think you should have taken your time with it. More animation, dialogue, and a cohesive story would have helped. So would incorporating more holiday-related characters. Flesh it out.
good if its ur first movie. i dont think santa would live there though. kinda funny.
This belongs in the e-card section
I don't know if there's an e-card section anymore, but this is totally where this belongs.
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