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this is my first submission... be nice.
advice is much appreciated
THE ENDENS FUNEY
uh yea okey
That was not what I was expecting. I don't think subtitles were needed. There wasnt much dialogue to beginning with and if people can't hear it ( expected deafOs) they are retarded. But since there is the song playing should have been. Oh and I dont think the grey dudes shirt's face should be moving must of be a glitch.
hey, thanks for the review
no the shirt is not a glitch. it is ment to act like the charector's face; who along with everyone else, doesnt have one.
and as for the subtitles, i know one or two people that dont understand me when im trying to talk to them, so to be safe i added them in. the subtitles did block off the guys shirt in the doctor scene though... but i was way too lazy and excited to bother with it
Hey, you did pretty good! Keep it up. It was pretty nice, although, it's spelled helmets. Keep it up. I liked the humor at the end, although the car ride could have been a little shorter.
helmets... realy? i em nod gud et speeling
jk, i can spell better then that. ill be sure to get someone to pruf read everything befor i sumbit my
as for the car ride; i thought of making it shorter, but i wanted it to stop at a sertain part of the song. now im not sure anymore
thanks for the great review! :D
THe voices were HELLA annoying
The story sucked the visuals were hard on the eyes and voices...OH GOD THE VOICES...0/5
im sure ill try using a diffrent style on my next submission
and as for the voices... im not an actor, and i was pretty despirat for a recording program that saves on an mp3 file format
as for the story. you iether enjoy the sence of humor, or you dont.
this was lovely.
i like your art style and the OH MY GOD OH MY GOD and how his shirt kept on lookign around...just great stuff.
thank you :D
the shirt is sapoused to act like the his face. becouse he doesnt have one. not to mention anyone else
im glad you cought that
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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