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I made this for a project for school. Judge it if you must but I am hapy with it. Please give feedback.
I FOUND THE EASTER EGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! at the end there is a happy face click on it and Jay's laugh comes up XD
It's a bit silly, but at the sime time pretty amusing. Things you could improve would be the drawing, in all honesty they look pretty crappy, lines are uneven, not much detail, no good shading, colors are very plan as well. The plot itself is entertaining and the voicing/sync is all good. Keep it up!
good music at the start and at the end but i did not like that everyone had the same voice.
Hm, could use some work.
Well although the submission itself wasn't bad, it could use some definate work. For one, the graphics in it are pretty bad, things like shading straight lines and more than one color are non-existent in this flash, and that would have helped a lot in this submission. The story itself wasn't that great ether, it didin't capture my attention and it was just plain imature, in my eyes. Overall this submission isn't that great and I didin't like, hell I don't know who would. What did you get on this anyway?
This submission was not enjoyed by me, because it seemed to have little purpose. It seemed like it was just the idea of a stick killing people for no reason. The voices seemed off base in this too. I think you may have a problem with leaning in too close to the microphone, because it really shows. Why would a stick be called Mr. Fixit? I guess it's probably part of the joke, but I have little comprehension for what the joke is.
You also need to work on your graphics. Everything doesn't look well detailed in this, and it is hard to believe this was made in 2007. The song at the end was a bit annoying, too. I guess I can still give you credit for having such a high rating for your cartoon which I don't know how you got. Try to have more of a going joke as it goes along.
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