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I made this for a project for school. Judge it if you must but I am hapy with it. Please give feedback.
Hm, could use some work.
Well although the submission itself wasn't bad, it could use some definate work. For one, the graphics in it are pretty bad, things like shading straight lines and more than one color are non-existent in this flash, and that would have helped a lot in this submission. The story itself wasn't that great ether, it didin't capture my attention and it was just plain imature, in my eyes. Overall this submission isn't that great and I didin't like, hell I don't know who would. What did you get on this anyway?
It's a bit silly, but at the sime time pretty amusing. Things you could improve would be the drawing, in all honesty they look pretty crappy, lines are uneven, not much detail, no good shading, colors are very plan as well. The plot itself is entertaining and the voicing/sync is all good. Keep it up!
THIS IS AWESOME
for a school prodject, this is very well done and has a great story, also the music at the begining fit so well with ur flash.... kudos an awesome job :)
A short film about a park bench
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