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A new version of one of my very first flashes....though the art looks a bit more detailed and the story's bit more believable,I think the original one actually turned out better this one...hey review it and,tell me what you think!(Tagline:Two morons on a mountain...'nuff said.)

This took about 2 hours to make...or something like that,I wasn't really keeping track,but anyway...
By the way...this is a SHORT,it's supposed to be short,u shouldn't blam it just because it's short
cause I've seen LOTS of shorts that were either about this length and even some that were shorter.
Just letting ya know.

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Score: 2

"about your animation"

by: Nyrr

date: November 19, 2007

i dont so much care about the joke at all. i feel like a well animated submission will be more worth people's time no matter how stupid the content might be. the only thing this has going for it as far as animation is the timing of the mouths moving. they match up with the dialog. woohoo. whats wrong with it is that the lips of your characters arent making any sounds. just looks like theyre gnashing theyre teeth. i think it would be worth your time to try out animating somebody saying words and getting the mouths to make the shapes theyre supposed to while they talk.

i also REALLY think it would be worth your time to consider your background a little better. having that one guy standing off to the far left of the screen served little purpose other than to make the shot visually frustrating. if you want this to take place on a mountain, or near a cliff as the case seems to be, then draw that place. making a cliff isnt too hard. think wile e coyote.

i hope this helps! keep trying!

November 19, 2007

Author's Response:

Yeah...well I don't really think that'll help me too much,I don't have time to make great animations.
I have time to make a fairly good joke and put it into a flash or comic once in a while,I'll admit...this
one really didn't turn out very well at all.This is why I mostly just draw comics or still pictures.
Thanks for the review anyway.