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11/19/2007 | 01:45AM EST
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2.25 / 5.00
Score Rank: #101,141 Popularity Rank: #104,831
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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A fight animation between a brown haired kid and a black haired guy
Very short also.
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Average Score: 2.7 / 10
"Drawings are good!"
Some fo the humor is great also..Just isn't long enough to catch the attention its like Bam your into it a little then BAM its over haha. Either way its alright. Your a good artist!
Yeah, I get what you're saying. Sorry about that. I might give it a thought about restarting it but that is unlikely to happen.
":P didnt dig it"
its allright, good style of drawing but adding color to anything was a bad choice, and so was not actually making the figures move separate parts of their bodys...
I have to disagree with you there with the colours. I thikn if there were no colours, it'd be too boring, you know? It'd be way too plain I reckon. And also, they did move seperate body parts. But thanks anyway.
"im sorry, ive got alot to say."
i dig the sketchy quality of your drawings. thats nice. just from looking at this teaser though, i can tell you that you need to make some concrete decisions regarding the colors you use. for example, that big block of gray that is the road. why not do away with that and just stick with the nice black and white sketch theme you have going? it would make more sense visually i think. i also feel like your animation could be better timed. making some of the movements faster wouldnt hurt i dont think. i also think that you could develop your drawing style a little more. try drawing some of your poses from photos of people in the positions you want. or better yet, having someone model for you so that you can realistically capture that position. if you put in the time this animation could be really good.
You are forgiven. It's nice when people like you give good reviews. Thanks for the help