Score: 8
"Cool!"
date: November 18, 2007
Wow, very cool! I loved this. The beginning did not feel slow AT THE TIME, because it did a great job of building my curiosity and getting into the mood. After the animation was done, I realize that the intro is not in proportion with the length of the flash. The only solution-- make it longer! And the end was very abrupt. DUE to all the slow build up, I expected something more to happen.
Your drawing style varied a lot from shot to shot. It was interesting, but I'm wondering why you chose to do that?
I really really liked the dramatic effects you used in this story. The timing was very good, I love Setu-Firestorm's music, and it was cute but very sad-- I wonder if she saved him, or if she was even real?
A couple minor technical points:
-Aren't his hands FREEZING with no gloves? And if he lost them or doesn't have them, why would he lean his hands down in the snow?
-The boy's hair is blowing in a different direction from the girl/angel's hair in that shot when they are right next to each other.
-In that same shot, their hair is blowing fiercely, but the snow is still falling slowly and gently and doesn't seem affected.
Nice job.
November 19, 2007
Author's Response:
Thanks for the critique! =D
