Score: 4
"wow..."
date: November 18, 2007
OK, I'll admit, it had some good stuff in it, but, overall, if this is your 50th flash, you should be doing better. SOme helpful pointers might be to work on something longer. With places like newgrounds.com, you don't have a release date that people demand it to be out by, so take all the time you need to perfect the video/game. Another one might be to slow down the video just a little. It was kind of fast, and, even though my mind goes a mile a minute, I really coudn't keep up with it or find some sort of a plot. The three main things to watch out for in animation are this:
Quality of animation(From really pixelated to really smooth)
Running time
Plot line
If you have all three of those down, you'll be making better flash in no time. I wish you luck on making magnificent flash.
November 18, 2007
Author's Response:
yes, and you would understand what goes into a flash because i love all of your frontpage cartoons....
oh wait.......
