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Insane Teleport Preview

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This is my first flash game. It's a preview of Insane Teleport.

I'm working on it for a while and wanna know what your opinion is.
what more do you want? what can be better?
what do you like and what sucks. be honest.

with that info i can make a final version. so write reviews!

i know this stuff belongs in alpha section but somehow the page is not working.

thanks in advance!

Hannemaster.
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Thank you all for great reviews, i totally agree with ya guys.
*Banging my head against the wall* *Must submit better quality and shit*
:-) im going back at actionscripting and photoshoppin' till it rocks!

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Liked

This was fun to just play around with, it was easy and needed not a whole of skill. The only thing I can suggest is focusing on fixing up the graphics and perhaps adding in some more elements. Nice idea all the way through.

~ DeIvL666 ~

(title in work)

I haven't seen an avoiding game quite like this before. It definitely has an interesting concept to it. The presentation is a bit weak though. Not much going on graphically. A fuller version is definitely needed with a scoring system and possibly some type of powerups you can pick up in the game.

good

a great idea/game but the only thisng is that i can't see the score bar...

Excellent Idea!

A topnotch idea, but needs more substance. The graphics seem to be copied from various sources, might just be me? If u added better graphics, mabey enemys that follow circular paths ect? this could be an awsome, addicting short game!

Its Alright...

Yeah this game was alright for a preview... i would like to see a final game to compare but its kind of hard to judge a preview

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*Graphics were "decent" and might have needed some additional things like a background picture.
*Added to the graphics you should have worked on the main screen, and add a background screen
*For the instructions to play, you forgot one little thing, THE INSTRUCTIONS ON HOW TO PLAY!!! just kidding but really, those should have been stated... i figured it out but you know those people that don't think at all... just play and drool all day XD
*Everything went smoothly, except for the refill of the teleport meter, and the area where they teleport, a.k.a. the area where you click, could be a little more accurate, exactly where i clicked wasnt always the area where he teleported...

OVERALL
i liked this game and i think that if you worked on it some more, and added a little bit more of a story or another element to the gameplay, it would hit a better audience. and you might wanna work on the name of the game, because its a little weird, you should make a more catchier name
i give this one a 5 OUTTA 10 for the fact that its a preview and the most i give for previews is 5

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2.87 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 17, 2007
4:01 PM EST