Score: 7
"Undeveloped."
date: November 17, 2007
I'm certain this took a decent chunk of your time, however...
The animation in general as well as the audio synchronizing with the flash needs some serious work. It would be nice if there was some color, but some artistic strategies don't need it (but usually they excel in some other area). The humor was decent, but it has been affected by the overall lacking qualities in this flash.
Since you did not seem to be poorly animating on purpose, I feel that you indeed have room for improvement, and you can easily do so by animating the lip movements about twice as much as you do currently, as well as increasing the overal movement of characters involved by about the same level. Attempt to either invest time in creating very symmetric/developed or very flowing characters (just one of those staple attributes can make any flash very popular). Continue using jokes less used, because those are the ones that people will be more likely to not hate.
One point you should definitely work on no matter which direction you go is synchronization between audio and video. I noticed some severe points where the video lagged behind nearly a second or two, which is very bad (unless you were creating a satire on foreign films).
November 17, 2007
Author's Response:
I dont know ive always had the problem of the animation lagging behind the sounds. if you have a solution drop me a pm please.