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Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
11/16/07 – 08/15/08
(Fore note - This is my very first real animation)
And So it begins, the very first END OF WAR animation is finally up, after careful years of planning and drinking vodka, I finally have the first installment finished, mind you, im not very good at flash yet - Theyll get much better I PROMISE
And PLEASE - TELL YOUR COOL NEWGROUNDS FREINDS - I want lots of publicity!!! ^^
ALL END OF WAR FEATURE ARE THE COPYRIGHT OF ZAPINC - ALL CHARACTORS AND ASSOCIATES ARE WILLINGLY GIVEN TO ZAPINC
Fanart is more than welcome, but Fanflash animations are not, because they will undoubtedly be better
Music;
Gears of War
Extreme G
The Chinese weapon looked like a giant 3D Pacman
It's not that bad =)
"there is serious potential for this to become epic"
this has serious potential behind it.Sharpen your skills, devlope some story lines and this could even make it into the greats of the portal. And you will know you really hit it when there is a newground portal fighting game with one of your guys in there.
considering this is ur first real flash the animation is relly good ..
the plot is very interesting and i relly look forward to the sequel :)
Good start. I'll break it down into the awsome/needs improvment
Awsome: Good ideas, basic animation is down. Creativity is awsome.
Needs improvement: Artistic skills could be sharpened a bit, spelling and grammar errors should be fixed. Just refine it more, make it flow better.
Great start for an animation, hope you continue to sharpen your skills.
Art:
Some was really good, some was average. That main character leading the green guys was drawn well, so were the guns. 7/10
Animation:
Pretty good animation here... when the guns were firing, you needed to add a visual effect though than just a gun moving up and down and shooting sounds. Where was the blast? Some good FBF. 8/10
Sound:
Pretty good music, voice acting was ok but not the best. Good use of sound effects. 7/10
Overall:
Pretty interesting flash. Nice work.
-ShortMonkey-