This is a first Flash submission, and the first Flash movie I ever actually completed. I decided I needed to buckle down and make a kinda crappy flash using lots of shortcuts or else I'd never get one done. Now I have this, which I figure I can get some feedback on.
It's about 3 minutes long if I remember right. Now I know this movie needs a lot of work and I hope to fix it sometime. A short list of problems:
-voiceover: I have a slight cold and am way too close to my mike.
-sounds need to be sync'ed much betterwith the visuals.
-art needs to be improved.
-self-pity and self-promotion need to be removed from final text.
These things said, I welcome [constructive] criticism as well as [polite] expressions of interest or disinterest. I mean, I want to tell my story, sure, but it'd be nice if people also wanted to listen. ^^
This story tells the vague background of a group of characters I made up in a d20 ruleset. If I have the time (unlikely), I would love to make the whole thing into a Flash series. I don't want to get into the complete business about it, I'm really kinda new to my NG membership. More information about all of these things can be found in my dA account:
The movie itself is also posted on dA under my alternate acct there, along with some other art related to this series: