it was cool and funny! i really liked it!
Criminal Justice System
November 13, 2007 –November 29, 2009
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
Hello...it's me, bomarc.
It's been a while since I had submitted anything to NG. Been workin, lookin for work, working on my comic book (hopefully ready by 2008), and other stuff. I've done some short flash over the year I really don't want to post up here, but I might just put this one up, for the fact being I was bored, and this was the best looking one out of this year's hackjobs.
I know it looks like shit, but I had to rush animate this flash with my brother for his project on the Criminal Justice System, and it took me 2 days to do the whole thing (that also includes work (at the time), household matters, and biological functions). Credit goes to him as well for the idea as well as some minor animation. Also, this is the uncut version. He had to edit his to add his name only, as well as getting rid of the drug joke and the different credits screen. This is my version.
Enjoy, and please review with sincere criticism. If you like it, then vote 5. If not, the you may score low, and review, letting me know what needed to be improved (yes, I know...it WAS a rushjob). There WILL be a better animation come 2008 to promote my comic (I HAVE been practicing).
Bless,
Ray N. (bomarc)
Reviews
...although this was hilarious at times, its easy to tell that youre not putting alot of effort forth. >.< I like your style, and i can tell that if you took the time, (and raised the FR), you would construct a kickass flash animation. Admitting that you rushed makes this all the much better, Im gonna have to check out your past presentations. Goodluck out there man, people can be brutal to quick-flicks.
~kenny
Except, don't mix realistic places with Limited color animation.
Still, that last possible death sentence was pretty whack!
I thought the vid was awesome. I think the fact that it was stick figures made it more funny. I thought the Censored Shower Scene part was funny and MJ appeared even in this-guess it was on you mind still LOL. This was cool and it funny as well. I think your work is cool and you should keep it up. You can't get worse you can only get better with each piece of work you produce. Learn from Happy Accidents. Don't sell yourself so short all the time. This is the first time I felt I actually wanted to review something.
The only thing that i didnt like was the crappy stick figures other than that,it was pretty cool!
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- 2.96 / 5.00