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Ok this is the second version of this I'm submitting to the portal. The older one was deleted by me as there were issues with it. Hopefully this one should be better.

I know nothing really happens in this and it's very short but its only meant to be a teaser to try and introduce some characters. After all what do you expect for 150kb?

There will be 2 more of these over the next month each will reveal a little more about the series.

Alternatively if you want to learn more about ArkAngel check out my other submissions on Newgrounds or keep checking my user page for regular updates.

Please enjoy and constructive critique is always welcome! :)
Regards,
Paul

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Score: 10

"can't wait for more"

by: darkmekaro

date: November 11, 2007

Hmm its a bit of a different style i see you're going for, but it stands out to me i like what you're doing, so i'm really looking forward to the final product.

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Score: 10

"Anticipating the series"

by: Lifepoint1

date: November 11, 2007

Though it's just a trailer, it was well put together and served as a great little tease for what's to come. I like the presentaiton and art style you chose. Very groovy stuff.

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Score: 7

"okey"

by: iza9

date: November 11, 2007

it was good, but too short and there was never no action. i hope the next ones will be better.

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Score: 4

"The art is good."

by: JadenSenden

date: November 11, 2007

The art in this teaser is very good, but there is no real animation. I'm interested to see the final product.

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Score: 6

"Not bad"

by: BassMasterFei

date: November 11, 2007

I think your art looks neat, but for some reason, the bit of animation looked really jerky. If you didn't use tweens to move the characters, I think it would help a lot.

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