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Submitted: 11/05/2007 | 10:49PM EST

File Info: Movie | 3 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 3.09 / 5.00

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Author Comments

This peice is about a young man's death, and how it impacted those around him. The young man is left nameless, and the name will never be mentioned. Also yes the school in the poem was mine, but I did not directly know him.

This is week two of my weekly poety, which will continue for months to come. I have choosen only death so far not to be morbid those jsut happen to be the most meaningfull poems I could think to sumit.

Again the audio is by Hanai. The song by him I have choosen to add I feel adds to it quite nicely.

Also new to the second one is:
Preloader: Thought it would be better with one although it instanly loads.

A backdrop: This is done by me using my smudge art, then I filtered it. I don't normaly filter it, but I wanted you to be able to consentrate on the text more, so by using this filter the image lost some of it's flare. This loss also helps fit it into the feeling of the poem.

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Average Score: 7.7 / 10

Score: 8
galaktek69

"touching"

date: July 20, 2008

I thought this was very beautiful. But like the others I felt it was hard too read because of the font and the color. Like the summary says, this was touching. Thank you.

August 7, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, and I have a lot to work on for the flash :)

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Score: 9
Artaxer

"Chya"

date: April 25, 2008

Lovely, lovely, lovey. Once again I loved this work of yours. The text was a bit hard to read. I wouldn't suggest using red again. The muic was wonderful. I thought the pages flipped a little too slowly this time, but it was defintely better for the slower readers out there.

August 7, 2008

Author's Response:

Ya my flashes need some work ;/

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Score: 10
RavilMelling

"well done"

date: November 21, 2007

beautiful

November 21, 2007

Author's Response:

Thankyou :)
You might wan to check out my past and future works.

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Score: 8
coldturkeysong

"Like the other guy said."

date: November 7, 2007

My eyes sore from trying to read the text. @_@
I love that you are always dealing with serious matters; expressing sorrow of lost child and paying sympathy for the abused.

But, the font size and the color of the writing do get in the way of fully appreciating poem. One last thing: Buttons! Make buttons so ppl can flick through it. Just a suggetion. :)

November 7, 2007

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, also great news. My next one wich is 50% done has not only button but a menu too. Also I am reworking everything to make it easier to read. Losing the whole image backing, and doing a nice design for it instead. Dont forget to watch the next one XD It should be out this monday, maybe sooner, but then IDK if I could really call it a weekly thing XD

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Score: 10
ghettojello

"compared to your last one..."

date: November 6, 2007

this one is an improvement by a lot. im scoring you a 10 because im trying to support your intro to interenet flash. Good luck bro. Song worked great with it.

November 6, 2007

Author's Response:

Thanks a little support is always supported.

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