Eulogy For: The End Of The MK
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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
11/05/07 – 09/26/09
This is my first flash entry, though it took a long time because i was getting better at flash and i wanted to make things better. the sound i think is pretty good the animation is alright i suppose. I really have to thank Alvin-Earthworm Because with out him this animation would never have turned out the way it did!
and Randy Solem, the second one is better sure to plz alot more people, and it has a few charcaters that people no about and one that they don't
nice one
great animation and story
That was very good for y're first flash. Make more!
I'm surprised Alvin was cited as the inspiration and not Randy Solem. This seems more inspired by Rise of the MK then SMBZ.
The animation itself wasn't very satisfying. Although some sprites are used they are mostly choppy. The back rounds and panorama is just painful to look at. Nothing blends together effectively in this flash. Also I noticed that during the escape the castle scene the Yoshi's run OVER the first tree on the right. Quite a few times. Something that glaring is the result of two things, both negative;
1) Authour didn't even bother to watch the movie over and correct mistakes.
2) Authour just didn't feel like correcting the mistake.
Regardless of reason why should we watch the movie if the authour doesn't even want to correct or make the movie it's absolute best before submission?
The sounds are stereotypical Mario sounds, except they are ill used. I don't know where that "Uh,uh,uh,uh" sound Mario makes comes from but it is painful to listen to. The music is not mood setting at all. When it's used. Mostly the flash is devoid of sound and truthfully that makes it quite dull.
I know where the authour is trying to go with this but this is being too ambitious for something that is not very entertaining.
First impressions are key. Unfortunately mine is that this movie is dull, not well thought out, and rushed. 0/10.
although it was REALLY sloppy around the edges (especially with the text), it looks like you put a decent enough effort into it.
Make sure you put more megadeth in next time! >:D
SMBZ copy!
This really should have been your own original masterpiece not an imitation of Alvin's!
Some parts were good, like when mario fought bowser and the koopas with the bomb!
But over all... it just wasn't very entertaining! sorry!
I will say this once. You need a real credits screen. You have to put in where you got the music and the sprites, otherwise, you are saying you made everything. Plus, people might hear some music and want to find it. Anyway, that was my only complaint. Make more. Make more now.
try harder next time.
if that was really your best then you should practice before you submit stuff. my guess is that this was the first file you've ever made. you should at least make 2 short practice movies before trying to make an "epic" movie.
good first try, story/text was a little slopy as well as some of the overlays you put on sprites (surprise particularly) but a nice effort, like other people have said makeing your own sprites would have been good especially becalus this is your first flash but keep up the good work (more fight related scenes next time?) i look forward to seeing your next work.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKKKKKKKKAAAAAAAYYY
This is pretty cool for your first Flash submission although it could have been done better.Animations need improvement but other than that I enjoyed this Flash.
Some parts are funny and action-packed, but the sound effects are just obnoxious.
make the part 2 for ng...for NGIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
It's good for a beginner, but it needs a LOT of work. If you need help, try to find some onlike tutorials, or better yet, try to teach yourself drawing and animating techniques. You can never practice too much! =^)
its allright your characters luigi mario peach etc.... but ur movie is alright i like good job for a begginer
did you get the idea from "Rise of the Mushroom Kingdom"(ROTMK good moove btw)
