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A pizza man gets called to his death.... The fifth floor.....
Again i based this short on the short Salesman (go watch it in toons serious section).
I learned how to do linear gradient effects so the drawings are pretty good. But the music, it doesnt build up so It seems like it cuts off short.
Good horror scenes.
As far as backgrounds go, they were decent. Very nice style to this flash. Newgrounds could use more horror flashes like this. The music was nice, it fit very well with this flash. The best part of this flash was the horror scenes. If the graphics were really good, my heart migh thave been raceing!
As far as characters go, they were poorly drawn. If you want people to take this flash more seriously then you need to improve on your graphics. No audio? I know not a lot of voice acting could be used in here but it would have been nice to hear that pizza man scream before he got his head chopped off!
Over all this is a below average horror flash. The graphics weren't very good and it was very short but they were pretty good horror scenes. The music fit well also. If you just Improve on the graphics and the length this flash would be so much better! You did a pretty good job on this flash, keep it up! Good luck on your future flashes!
omg this sucks baadly. Even crap is better.
This sucks like hell man. You didn't even put a beginning. All it starts out with is dead guys on the "5th Floor." Man, another thing thats sucks. I run into hella of these craps everyday. Sorry man, "THIS SUCKS!"
this makes christmas fruitcake look good it wasnt good so go and make a decent flash
that was really cool and the big bangy bit ruled, scared the crap out of me but why did the guy want pizza? oohh eating, i remember that thing...
No, not really. Where is the plot? Yeah kill, kill, call pizza guy, kill, eat pizza... oh wait there wasn't even any pizza eating. Such a good waste of pizza
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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