Short and simple
Yep, it is short and simple. I like that. You also don't even attempt to do voices until that one scene. Which was kind of cool to watch it blend.
Anyway, the comedy was pretty nice. had a lot of it and it was in fact funny. I cracked up at the...boo,kirby...Thing.
Your character descriptions were kind of funny. "The girlfriend" No name at all. You know, I do that kind of thing. "So....what is her name" "I don't know....Well, instead of coming up with a proper name, let us play eye spy or some shit." "I don't like eye spy" "Ok then, her name is officially. Whiny girl." ya....I do have some fun.
As for the father. You can't be cool headed and freak out at bad things...Cool headed describes someone who doesn't have a "Berserk button" As in. Someone who literally isn't effected by most things. I could be considered cool headed. Someone who doesn't react could be considered cool headed. Someone who doesn't really freak out about good things, but does bad things. Is just someone who doesn't really get excited.